For the birds

WALT:use better vocabulary (whispered instead of said, gigantic instead of big)

Once upon a time there was a little bird that was the size of your computer mouse and then another came and sat next to it and it had a massive yawn and it pushed the other one by accident then the other little bird got angry at him and so they started arguing and then another bird came and they started arguing and then all 15  birds were there and all arguing.

Then they all stop because they saw a bird that was watching them and the little birds started whispering jokes to each other about the other bird and then started laughing.Then the other bird came and sat in the middle and all the birds moved away from the other one.

Then the little birds poked the other bird and he fell down but he was still hanging on and then one of the little birds pecked at the other bird claws and it slipped of  and then he had an idea to peck at the other birds claws and so they did but then one of the little birds noticed that if he fell of they would go flying into the air and so he told the others and they started saying to the little birds that were happily trying to get the other bird off and they stopped but then?

They went flying into the air just like I said and all of there feathers came off  when they went up.So they all fell on the ground with the other bird sitting there and then he started laughing so hard that his head could pop open but he was okay.And so the birds grabbed a feather to cover them and then hid behind the bird.                    The End!!!!!!